Someone To Bank On - Carson Wescot

Some One To Bank on was a sweet little book. It was lite with no heaviness. Now for the record I used it to buffer myself while reading four installments of the [book:The Flesh Cartel #3: Choices|16081678]. I liked the premise but it could have used a good, tough editor to
clean up a few things. The author needs to be more careful not to be repetitive and every thought doesn't need to be explained to the reader. I'm no writer but I am a reader, I know what needs to happen for a story to flow. I kind of liked were this was going ... How a family can develop with love and understanding. I just didn't think I needed to go to the bathroom & shower everyday with every character.

Yes, I'll check out the next book .......writes. I'm hoping for improvement.