This could have been a sweet story. I don't think I've ever written this but the editor should be slapped! I don't normally notice editing, luck me. This time, I was stunned how many times I'd stop reading to make sense of what I was reading. There was a bazaar sense of time. Oh and I don't care how big or small your town is if a cop gets stabbed or shot on or off duty everyone knows. So where was his partner? It was the lack of details I really missed. I wanted to play The Drinking Game. Everytime Desiree Cole used the words 'the other' I could have a shot wait, I'd be dead from alcohol poisoning.